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February 1, 2013
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Twilight Sparkle by Hawk9mm Twilight Sparkle by Hawk9mm
So, Yeah .. um... This is my first drawing in my life. I mean, like really. I never drew something more advanced than some doodles in my notebook. I'm a total newbie at this.
It's also my first art made by my new tablet.
I'm gonna be honest with you - I don't like it too much. It was totally different in my mind(as always) - Concept art had some fluffy thingy ( also know as fur :p) in her ear and more fluffy mane. And I totally screw up her eyes.
But I think it's pretty good for my first drawing. I learned few things ( coloring, outline, sketches, etc. ) ... Ok , I'm gonna stop with this boring stuff now.

Important stuff :
I would really appreciate any constructive criticism and opinion. I would like to know, what you don't like, what could be better etc. ( I know that the whole pic could be better but I already explained why it's so average). If you know some techniques, tricks, good tutorials - let me know - I need to be better at this, and any help is important ^_^
Thanks !

Want to use it ? - Ask me first.


Tools : Adobe Photoshop Elements 10 and Wacom Intuos 5 M

My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro Studio
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Vabla Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Well, beats my first attempts. Though I didn't even doodle in my notebooks X_x
Aszir Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Myślałem ,że ci to gorzej wyszło xd
A jest nawet dobrze :3
Autofly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
better than everything i can do^^ i'm sure you will become really good at this soon.
Hawk9mm Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
NateTheBrony Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Not bad, bro. :)
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StandingLeaf Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
You know, it's quite good for a first try! All you really need is practice, practice and practice! Just a little thing ro improve, aside of what you already stated: the ear begin a bit too low and it's too bat-like shaped.
Hawk9mm Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually that ear shape was deliberate, because I wanted to be a little bit different, But yeah, It's kinda too pointy.
Also, now I see it's too low.. dammit, It looked fine on sketch. Sketch had fur inside ear, so it looked better.
Anyway, Thanks for comment :)
Spyrorulez Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Don't forget the new wings!
Hawk9mm Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's not funny >.<
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